User talk:Chickenkicker96

deleted sandbox?
Did you mean to delete the content from your sandbox? If it was an accident you can revert to a previous edit! AugusteBlanqui (talk) 09:32, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

comments on draft
This is a good draft. You've found some good sources. Suggestions:


 * There is an excess of citations (every sentence); we'll discuss strategies for consolidating citations in class.
 * For the lead: The siege of Kilkenny occurred in 1650 as part of Cromwellian conquest of Ireland.  [then a sentence on significance, ...as a result...]
 * Some copy editing to catch minor errors

AugusteBlanqui (talk) 14:41, 23 July 2017 (UTC)