User talk:Chintanpatel2634/Sex in film

Dfee2's peer review:

The sex between women section included a lot of pertinent information about the subject. I think you covered the section nicely. I would suggest that you may want to add a section about other LGBT groups, in addition to lesbians. I noticed that same-sex male scenes were discussed within other sections, like in the US section. There could be a section about non-binary and transgender individuals within sex scenes in movies. I’m not sure how much research has been done on the topic, so it may be difficult to find applicable material.

You covered a lot of information on sex between women in the article, which wasn’t previously included. I would suggest making a new heading for LGBT scenes and move the lesbian sex scene section under that. It may encourage other contributors to cover more content. Finally, I would recommend adding more citations to your section. It seems like there is a lot of information, but very few citations in the text, which may be cause pushback on Wikipedia.

Dfee2 (talk) 23:28, 6 November 2019 (UTC)