User talk:Chintanpatel2634/sandbox

Hi there!! A couple things for my peer review. 1. Instead of "even heterosexual movies" maybe phrase it as "even heterosexual scenes in movies"? I think it would be more clear. 2. Look into Carol? I think it came out in like 2015 but there was a big buzz around it a while ago and I think it could be useful for your page if you haven't already seen stuff on it. 3. The line about gay men thinking that hetero sex scenes were better so they could imagine the woman as a man is a little confusing upon first reading. Maybe a quick rewrite or extra sentence specifying imagining the woman in the hetero sex scene not the lesbian one? 4. Lesbians are often heavily sexualized for the gaze of people who aren't wlw, it would be interesting to add in a bit about directors of lesbian movies and how many of them are actually lesbians vs how many of them are just portraying them? I don't know much about directors of lesbian movies but it seems like it could be something interesting to look into.

-Taylor — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tmanyrath (talk • contribs) 20:08, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall good content added. There were typos and grammatical issues throughout that I edited directly in your page. I also thought you could have talked more about the same-sex scenes and how they were perceived by others, or how they may have been influential in prompting more, versus just a movie synopsis. But overall very good. Nlegate (talk) 17:21, 10 December 2019 (UTC)