User talk:ChinyereDenise/sandbox

Brandon's Peer Review
Bgd4 (talk) 05:34, 9 December 2018 (UTC)Hi Chinyere,

I think that the information you added is relevant to the page and adds a new perspective to colorism that wasn't previously there. My only recommendations would be to 1) add sources for the statistics you used (I think you knew that already though, they might just not be showing up on my sandbox) and to 2) think about adding an example of a lightening product (a beauty product commercial that doesn't include a broad range of skin tones, a product that has the side effects you mentioned, a high profile celebrity that used one of these products, etc.)