User talk:Chippyeditor/sandbox

[Peer review by Mackenzie Behm]

You need a source for stating that she is a self-proclaimed feminist. I also wouldn't start with the bolded headlines, it doesn't really fit the look Wikipedia articles usually have. Instead, I would include more of big headers with sections on her education, family and more. Also, when you include a source, I wouldn't write "this source...." -- just cite the source you're using instead. Refrain from using superfluous words such as "seriously" at the end of your sentence. Make it concise, to the point, and easy for anyone to understand. Mackenziebehm (talk) 17:41, 15 November 2018 (UTC)