User talk:Chis Maxwell

Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) (November 27)
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AfC notification: Draft:James Chisholm (Senior) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:James Chisholm (Senior). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 20:46, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) (December 24)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) has been accepted
 James Chisholm (Senior), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:05, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
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Chisholm

 * Hello, repeating comment added on Jenks' talk page: -- I moved it- the bit in brackets is simply a disambiguation for people with the same name, and not a big deal. Senior is a term we rarely use, Junior is dabbed as (politician). (merchant), (pastoralist) would be fine. (Australian pioneer) may be better but we don't seem to use that one. I second the compliments above, clearly you are family but you have managed to avoid all the associated pitfalls and write a very respectable article Epistemos (talk) 10:52, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for he clarification. My preference would be James Chisholm (Merchant). With thanks Chis 58.111.140.55 (talk) 10:54, 4 January 2016 (UTC)