User talk:Chitimes2/An Jung-sik/Poppyprint Peer Review

Received Peer Review
Hi Prof, I received your feedback. Staring with the lead, that is not written by me, but I will work on editing and reviewing it. As for your other comments, I followed most of the grammatical notes and changes, such as removing all the 'very's or changing awkward sentencing. Chitimes2 (talk) 02:22, 9 May 2023 (UTC)