User talk:Chloe.cbdt/sandbox

Hi Chloe, Your article is very well formatted and divided into subtopics.A few things/tips I noticed when reading that could improve or change your article would be: -Keep your bullet points consistent throughout the page, under HISTORY they are - not bullet points. -Try and be fluid with your writing, For HISTORY section, make it a paragraph instead of points, this way it is easier to read and will be less broken up and awkward. -Past president and intro are good -Projects section is well formatted -Not too many links or bolded words which is good and makes it easier to read -Under "the work of NWAC for MMIWG" take away the bullet points for the subheadings, it will make it more fluid. -under Financing section, points are awkward. It might be a good idea to either add more info or to add a link to the fundraising page for the NGO -Make sure when it comes to citing and sources that it is similar to when you cite Chicago style, have the corresponding link or the info with the citation.

These are just suggestions for your wiki article. The article is very good and very informative!

Ealish HIS229 (talk) 20:44, 15 April 2018 (UTC)Ealish Davies