User talk:ChloeFW/sandbox

Hopefully you can see that this is a much better format, and it's already looking like a much better article.

Some suggestions for additions:

1) Title should be something like "CT Scanning Cultural Objects"

2) Above the contents box you need to have an introductory line that introduces the topic and starts in the bolded format style... CT Scanning Cultural Objects is the use of CT Scans to understand cultural objects. This process is --> then a very basic 1 line about it as per the radiography article.

3) I think I would combine the CR-use of CT scans and History sections into a "History" section, just to keep it simple.

4) Move reference 7 off of the title onto somewhere in the first sentence of the case study. [Noted that its great to see these case studies, good stuff]

5) Make sure you drop in an image of CT scan being done on something cultural, and if possible an image of something CT scanned showing the sort of thing you can find out.

6) Here is another great reference case study, and is quite famous https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/europe/germany/11432544/Mummified-monk-revealed-inside-1000-year-old-Buddha-statue.html also here http://www.history.com/news/ct-scan-reveals-mummified-monk-inside-ancient-buddha-statue and although mentioned in Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buddhist_mummies (citation 3) I can't currently find images that can be used.

Please remove the C-R box until your article is ready to publish live, as your sandbox will start to show up on it. I've never quite figured out why it picks up sandboxes for the project pages but for some reason it does.

--Daniel Cull (talk) 20:24, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

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Hi Chloe,

Once you have reformatted your draft to something akin to the radiography one, you should be able to quite simply fill out similar information, draw from that CT Scans article. Also, in addition to using some of the generic CT Scanning images, if you search 'CT Scanning Mummies' and similar on https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page you'll find a few useful images to illustrate your article and case studies. There is button when you bring up the images for using these images on Wikipedia to make your life easier.

Once you have done that, we'll be able to comment more effectively on the final look of your article. --Daniel Cull (talk) 09:44, 29 April 2019 (UTC)

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Hi Chloe,

Definitely look at this page on Wikipedia, your article will be very similar https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Radiography_of_cultural_objects --Rose Daly (talk) 16:17, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Here is another page you should reference https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CT_scan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rose Daly (talk • contribs) 16:19, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

If you need to find more resources look on AATA for case studies.

2A00:23C4:1709:7800:E8F1:446F:1C03:64B (talk) 09:04, 30 April 2019 (UTC)