User talk:Chloegoffin

Welcome!
Hi Chloegoffin, I think you made a pretty good translation but I noticed some parts I would say differently:

- I would not say " (and more than ten expatriates)" but "for about ten expatriates"

- I'd rather say "an awereness and fund-raising campaign" instead of repeating the word "campaign" twice

- [...] a writer who spent most of his life speaking on all the leprous' behalf or being the voice of all the leprous

JNHx23 (talk) 15:40, 13 April 2016 (UTC)