User talk:Chloejoy5/Third World Women's Alliance

Hi! Thanks for choosing this article to expand. I enjoyed reading your changes. Some informal notes: It was unclear where the edits were going, so maybe add some headings and note the location of the writing. Also! Be sure to add an image for visual expansion of the article. I think the first paragraph could be a bit more concise but great points in it! And, good on naming the organizations. Make sure to spell out the organizations names as well previous to the acronyms. Great work on the BWA paragraph. I’m excited to see how you expand that. For the sources, they were recent which is great! I’m wondering if the 2005 one is too long ago? I would recommend asking Prof. O’Brien about this! There were also seven of them which will aid in the overall expansion. Your writing was great, minimal grammar errors and great flow! Lastly, you did a great job on staying neutral! Excited to see the final product.

Zoeba8 (talk) 16:46, 3 April 2023 (UTC)