User talk:Chocolate2206

great start
Great start on the article! AugusteBlanqui (talk) 09:10, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

draft comments
This is a great start. Suggestions:
 * The background section needs to edited for clarity. Describe first what "Open Door" was providing as a service, then go into the detail.
 * The text of the infobox is easy to change using 'edit source' rather than the visual editor.
 * Be clear that there was a High Court judgement first which was upheld by the Supreme Court.
 * Edit for clarity and to remove redundancy.
 * Replace "Production" with "Protection" where appropriate!
 * More is needed on the European Court of Justice ruling. Did this annul the Supreme Court ruling?
 * AugusteBlanqui (talk) 14:27, 22 July 2017 (UTC)