User talk:Choisieon

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Peer Review: hyeonsung Do
Hello! I'm hyeonsung Do, taking a media trend class!

First of all, I really enjoyed the article! It's a difficult topic, but I think you translated it neatly.

But I think there are some parts that need to be modified.


 * 1) I think the translation of the dictatorship is wrong. 채제 (X) -> 체제 (O)
 * 2) I think you need to explain not only the main characters but also the characters in the writing. I don't know who it is, so I can't understand it.

3. English is mixed in the Korean translation part. In the 'Kim Il Sung' part, English is left untranslated.

If you revise all the contents, it will be a perfect translation. Cheer up! HyeonsungDo (talk) 11:25, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: Kim minjun
Thank you for your good translation on the difficult subject of personal worship in North Korea.

There were a lot of interesting things. I was able to understand the history of North Korea's thought and the way it developed. In particular, the part about Kim Jong-il's death was interesting.

Of course, it was a good article, but there are some parts that are not natural in the process of translating. I think it needs a little correction.

KMJ0521 (talk) 01:04, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: Yoon Sarang
Hi, I'm Sarang yoon talking  class.

I thought that you translated difficult topics into easy-to-understand and accurate wording. The index was clearly divided, so the contents could be well understood.

However, I think the part that says [Great Leader] in the middle is misstated, so I think it would be good to correct this part.

I read it well. Thank you. Ysrfield (talk) 07:46, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: Gaeun Um
Hello, I'm Gaeun Um and I'm in the same class. First of all, I read your translation. I think it's a difficult content, but I think you translated it well, so I got good information. Thank you.

However, as I read the contents, there are some parts that are not smooth when translated into Korean in South Korea's evaluation of personal worship, so I thought it would be better to make some corrections. Thank you. Garongronga (talk) 07:26, 10 December 2023 (UTC)

Peer review (Deadline 6, Collective intelligence) - Kim minjun
Hello. I'm Kim minjun. I read your article.

Overall, I think it's a very good article. This is a good topic that contributes to the increase in Wikipedia information. But there is a need for some correction, the translation is a little unnatural. Also, it's that "quotation marks" are in an odd position in the text, and there's an error in the reference. If I correct this, I think it will be a more perfect article. KMJ0521 (talk) 09:43, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Please read and reply to messages on Korean Wikipedia
I see you have some messages at ko:사용자토론:Choisieon. Please read them, reply to them and improve the quality of your submission there, as asked by User:Ykhwong Piotrus at Hanyang&#124; reply here 06:03, 3 June 2024 (UTC)