User talk:Cholliman0919/sandbox

A good start on this. Be sure you use Wikipedia's codes to format your references, all of which are linked off of Template:Cite book. -Grlucas (talk) 16:20, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review by Brandon
I think adding more about her advocacy for women's rights would be great. The lead section claims that she was "championing a lengthy feminist program", but as you've pointed out, the article itself didn't go into a lot of detail about this. So, any information you can find on that would be great. Also, if you're able to find any information on it, I think it would be great to add more about her personal life, because the only section that really went into depth about her personal life was about her views on race. If there is any information out there that talks more about her personal life, I think that would be a good thing to add here. Randoelin11 (talk) 03:02, 1 July 2018 (UTC)

Response to Peer Review
Thank you for your review and the help with where to go on editing the article. I think that you are correct in adding more information about her personal life also as her personal life is not simply her view on race. Do you believe that maybe I should add a separate section that discusses her views on race and such? Cholliman0919 (talk) 03:14, 2 July 2018 (UTC)

Review
Your Article contribution seemed to be well articulated and focused. I read the draft you were working on and it was flawless. It was very well written seemed to come directly from a history book. I went back and reviewed your information that you added to the Wiki page and it all came from a neutral perspective. It also added to the already established content without standing out. So, in other words, the content you contributed blended in cohesively! Mrbigg08 (talk) 12:34, 21 July 2018 (UTC)

Peer review by Jameila
Your topic on women's suffrage and rights was a very good topic. I always enjoy reading about that subject because I am a women myself. Everything in your article is going off good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jameiladudley (talk • contribs) 17:09, 21 July 2018 (UTC)