User talk:Chris7M/Mesonychoteuthis hamiltoni

Peer review:
I think you're off to a great start! I think you did a good job about explaining the bioluminescence and how the colossal squid's eyes glow in the dark. Previously, the article just had a really simple sentence like "The squid's eyes glow in the dark," and you are explaining how they are able to do that. I would like to hear more about the symbionts that help give the squid its bioluminescence and exactly what the chemical reaction is. I think it would be helpful if you went more into the photophores.

Hi Chris; I don't think you added too little information for a subsection just on vision. I had to read the last sentence a couple of times, don't know if that was just me, but I was confused at first what you meant comparing it to a sperm whales sonar. I imagine it is meant to show the usefulness of the squid's eyes. I think maybe reworking that sentence a little bit would be beneficial, but overall I think it is succinct and informational. Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gonzalwk (talk • contribs) 18:02, 30 March 2022 (UTC)