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 * Ndugu Horace Alphonce Kolimba, fondly known as HK, was born on 29 December 1939 in Manda-Nsungu Village. His thirst for knowledge led him to pursue his secondary education at Chidya Secondary School in Masasi District and Minaki High School under the Anglican Church. During these formative years, he laid the foundation for his future achievements. He then embarked on a journey of higher education, earning a Bachelor of Law degree (LL. B) from the prestigious University of Dar-es-Salaam. This was a significant milestone, as he was one of the first 14 Tanzanians to study law at this esteemed institution, alongside Ndugu Joseph Warioba, the former Prime Minister and Attorney General of the United Republic of Tanzania. The University of Dar-es-Salaam School of Law, the oldest law training institution in East Africa, was the perfect platform for his intellectual growth. It was established on Wednesday, 25 October 1961, three months before independence, and was hosted by the Tanganyika National Union (TANU) (later Sukita) Building along Lumumba Street in Dar-es-Salaam.
 * After University studies, Kolimba joined the government Services of the Ministry of Justice and later joined the International Labour Organization (ILO) as an International Expert in Geneva, Swaziland. On his return to Tanzania, at the request of the Minister of Labour and Works Ndugu Job Lusinde, Kolimba was appointed as Senior Labour Officer in the then Department of Labour. President Nyerere appointed Ndugu Kolimba as District Development Director of the Moshi District and then as Regional Development Director of the Iringa Region, where he worked with Ndugu Mohamed Kissoky as a Regional Commissioner. Ndugu Kolimba was appointed by President Nyerere in 1976 as Principal Secretary of the Ministry of Public Service ( Central Establishment). Ndugu Kolimba worked as principal secretary in the Prime Minister's office when Ndugu Edward Sokoine was prime minister for the first time. Then, he worked as Principal Secretary for the Ministry of Labour and Social Welfare with Ndugu Alfred Tandau as a Minister. Ndugu Kolimba was elected chairman of the Tanzania Workers Union - JUWATA. Ndugu Kolimba was an instrument of the Human Resource Deployment Act No 6 ofon 13 March 1997 at Dodoma1983. Sheria ya Nguvu Kazi. The Act established a machinery design to regulate and facilitate the engagement of all non-disabled persons in productive work and connected matters. When Ndugu Edward Sokoine became the Prime Minister of the United Republic of Tanzania for the second time, President Nyerere appointed Ndugu Kolimba as Special Advisor to the Prime Minister. After the death of Ndugu Edward Sokoine on 12 April 1984, Ndugu Kolimba continued his responsibility under new Prime Minister Salim Ahmed Salim.
 * President Julius Nyerere appointed Kolimba as the Regional Commissioner of Kagera Region -Bukoba. Then, he transferred to Cost Region Kibaha due to his role in the Trade Union. Ndugu Kolimba was elected Chama cha Mapinduzi (CCM) Secretary General in 1993, taking over from Ndugu Rashidi Kawawa, who announced his resignation after more than 40 years in politics. Ndugu Kolimba was married to Mama Philomena and blessed with three sons and one daughter. Ndugu Kolimba passed away on 13 March 1997. He was only 57 years old and was laid to rest in his home place, Nsungu Manda.

This text is far to promotional and non-neutral for Wikipedia's uses, and it is also completely unsourced. There are facts within this text that could be used to expand the article, but we'd need citations to verify the facts. A more neutral version of your text is given below:
 * Ndugu Horace Alphonce Kolimba, was born on 29 December 1939 in Manda-Nsungu Village. He attended Chidya Secondary School in Masasi District and Minaki High School under the Anglican Church. He earned a Bachelor of Law degree (LL. B) from the University of Dar-es-Salaam.
 * After University studies, Kolimba joined the government Services of the Ministry of Justice and later joined the International Labour Organization (ILO) as an International Expert in Geneva, Swaziland. On his return to Tanzania, at the request of the Minister of Labour and Works Ndugu Job Lusinde, Kolimba was appointed as Senior Labour Officer in the then Department of Labour. President Nyerere appointed Kolimba as District Development Director of the Moshi District and then as Regional Development Director of the Iringa Region. Kolimba was appointed by President Nyerere in 1976 as Principal Secretary of the Ministry of Public Service (Central Establishment). Kolimba worked as principal secretary in the Prime Minister's office when Ndugu Edward Sokoine was prime minister for the first time. Then, he worked as Principal Secretary for the Ministry of Labour and Social Welfare with Ndugu Alfred Tandau as a Minister. Kolimba was elected chairman of the Tanzania Workers Union - JUWATA. He was an instrument of the Human Resource Deployment Act No 6 of 13 March 1997 at Dodoma1983. When Ndugu Edward Sokoine became the Prime Minister of the United Republic of Tanzania for the second time, President Nyerere appointed Kolimba as Special Advisor to the Prime Minister. After the death of Sokoine on 12 April 1984, Kolimba continued his responsibility under new Prime Minister Salim Ahmed Salim.
 * President Julius Nyerere appointed Kolimba as the Regional Commissioner of Kagera Region -Bukoba. Then, he transferred to Cost Region Kibaha due to his role in the Trade Union. Kolimba was elected Chama cha Mapinduzi (CCM) Secretary General in 1993, taking over from Ndugu Rashidi Kawawa, who announced his resignation after more than 40 years in politics.
 * Kolimba was married to Mama Philomena; together they had three sons and one daughter. Kolimba passed away on 13 March 1997. He was laid to rest in his home place, Nsungu Manda.

If you can provide citations for all the facts marked as "citation needed", and clarifications where indicated, we can consider expanding Kolimba's biography. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 12:18, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

Now that we've cleaned up the tone of the content, it still needs sources to be verifiable. Any unsourced material at Wikipedia may be removed at any time. If you cannot provide sources for your content, it will likely be removed. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 11:18, 14 May 2024 (UTC)