User talk:Chrisaco1/Jeaneen Carlino

Peer Review
Hi Chrisaco1, I did one of my peer reviews on your draft, I’ll paste it for you below in case it is helpful to you in your editing process :)

Overall this is a super solid draft for your article. One thing I noticed is that you will need to add a Lead section before the background section, and just have a few sentences to briefly describe what you go into detail on in the rest of the article. The content looks really thorough and balanced across sections, although I do think the tone could be a little more neutral. When it comes to using evidence I see that you have three sources which is good, but I am worried about using Jeaneen’s website as a source because I think you might have issues with that info being seen as biased and not reliable. Also, you’ll need to add in text citations to your article just to verify where each piece of info is coming from. But like I said to begin with, I think this is a really good start to the article, it will just need some fine tuning. Jojobruin24 (talk) 22:36, 8 November 2023 (UTC)