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78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 18:00, 29 November 2017 (UTC)

Kaspare Cohn Biography
In the early 20th century, Kaspare was the founder of the Kaspare Cohn Commercial & Savings Bank, which later became Union Bank & Trust, and of the Kaspare Cohn Hospital, which later became Cedars of Lebanon, one of two hospitals that merged to form Cedars-Sinai Medical Center in Los Angeles.

https://www.unionbank.com/Images/UnionBank-150-Years-of-History.PDF

http://www.referenceforbusiness.com/history2/73/Union-Bank-of-California.html

https://bonarhistory.wordpress.com/banarsky-bonar-family/kaspare-cohn-hospital/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cedars-Sinai_Medical_Center

References to Kaspare are peppered across wikipedia and wikipedia istself has several "empty references" to Kaspare at "https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MUFG_Union_Bank" and "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:New_user_landing_page&page=Kaspare+Cohn 173.200.78.186 (talk)Hi, Chris here (chrisbutanyway). A peer who has been working with becoming a Wikipedia contributor was supposed to pick up this thread. I am not terribly familiar with this site and each time I've ploddingly posted materials on Kaspare Cohn that seemingly conform to the requirements but the feedback that I've gotten has sometimes been unclear/non-specific/inaccurate.

Please don't delete, I'll circle-back on my side and check on the status of revising/updating this thread. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.200.78.186 (talk) 16:22, 10 September 2019 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Kaspare Cohn Biography


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CptViraj (📧) 11:53, 30 June 2019 (UTC)