User talk:Chriscolemanwiki

Not quite ready
In my opinion, the article (here) is not quite ready to move into article space. I'll explain why, and remove the request to move this article into article space. Other editors may feel differently, so if you disagree with my reasons, feel free to replace the move request template, and someone else may move it for you.

Wikipedia articles have a specific structure to them, specified in a guideline called Layout (Click on the link to see the details). Your draft doesn't incorporate some of the required elements of the structure. If you read the page, it will help you understand what is needed and how to do it.

In particular, the opening of your draft include information often placed in an Infobox. There are specialized infoboxes for many uses; I assume there is one for band (check other band articles to see). If you can't find one, let me know and I'll help look.

In addition, it is important for Wikipedia articles to have references to reliable sources. While you have some items labeled as citations, they are not formed as they should be. As a guide to including references properly, please see Citing sources and footnotes. Please add some references in the correct form to support the factual claims in the draft article.

Apologies for the long delay in responding. Unfortunately, one editor created a template so that you could let people know when you thought a draft was ready, but no one created a process to review the requests. I stumbled across the list by accident, with a few hundred entries at the time, and have been working to respond to them as well as trying to find a more organized way to respond. I hope shortly to have a better process so that future request get more timely response.-- SPhilbrick  T  10:32, 1 June 2010 (UTC)