User talk:Chrisdelima/sandbox

Hi! I think you did a really nice job with stating the facts and citing each one, making it clear that there is no original research included in your writing. You also do a really good job of maintaining a neutral point of view, as there is no evidence of persuading the reader of any ideas or facts. Keep up the good work! (Anyadavi (talk) 16:19, 19 April 2018 (UTC)).

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Hi again, my notes just got deleted, here they are again: Overall, your edits are concise and clear and remain neutral, just a few minor things:
 * At the end of the first paragraph, I'm not sure if "podcastees" is a common term used in this topic, but maybe it would sound better if you replaced it with "audience" or something like that? Up to you though.
 * In that same section, maybe you can spend a few more words clarifying what you mean by a "larger regulatory group or oversight".
 * "2000s", not "2000's"
 * No need to hyperlink "everyday life"!
 * I don't think kindergarten is capitalized

Other than that, everything looks good, I think it'll be a good addition to the Podcasting page! - Juliaxav (talk) 16:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)