User talk:Chrisforde

Hey. I saw the content you added to our article on Mr Starkell. Please be careful to not seem too... chatty, too informal. "A Canadian adventurist, diarist and author passes on" is something that would be in a newspaper headline, not in a Wikipedia article.

I've amended the article (and, regrettably, I've had to remove much of the content you added). I'm sorry. DS (talk) 00:15, 31 January 2012 (UTC)