User talk:Chrisjahn21/sandbox

Hello.

What does the article (or section) do well? The article defines esports & esports competitions to begin which gives the reader a nice introduction into what the article is talking about What changes would you suggest overall? Perhaps introduce the gaming indsutry a little more and explain how the industry has shifted more towards esports recognition & increased revenue in the recent years. Touch upon the first official and/or unofficial esports events that happened What are some of the different competitions that are held? (Note some large ones like EVO, VCT, eChampions etc) What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Add in some details to help create the full picture of esports events and how they have transformed Brown.wa (talk) 16:32, 22 October 2021 (UTC)