User talk:Chrismulterer

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Hello, Chrismulterer, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hey Chris it's Isaac. I just wrapped up looking at your draft. I like the strength of your writing, as well as how well you maintained neutrality. I put some suggestions on the google doc I shared with you. The main thing I suggested was looking to see if there were hyperlinks where you could link books and characters to your writing. I feel that that is an easy addition to help readers find places to get background if they don't have any. The book titles need to be Italicized. Spelling and grammar looked fine, but I would suggest underlining or italicizing book titles. I'm not sure how to tie in your article to mine, but I think there may be an opportunity to discuss the banning of the textbook in the ethnic studies course and relate it to censorship in a more broad use.Isaacschley (talk) 18:29, 21 November 2016 (UTC)