User talk:Chrisndg

The Cooler (Nightclub)
I know that the tags I have placed on the article sound rather harsh, but it is the truth. This article needs work and a lot of work. The main problem is the tone and style that makes it look and sound like an advertisement. The second main point is that it looks to contain your personal opinion or things that you just know. That is most visible at the section about the closure ''In real life, It seems all good things eventually have an end and early 2001,The Cooler seemed to be headed in that direction. With management disgust, raids, cabaret violations, and a host of other issues, the club moved on to Jan. 12th (...)'' As it is not sourced, it sounds like your own opinion.

So my request is plain: could you rewrite the article in a neutral manner and add more independent sources to it? The Banner talk 16:19, 6 November 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I appreciate any help you can provide in bringing this article in line with Wikipedia standards. I am confused about the advertisement citation. This club is no longer open. I intended to write an article about the cooler similar to CBGB's page, but include more historical information regarding the shows that took place there. I included a long list of independent citations. I'm at a bit of a loss for how to proceed. Any additional suggestions are appreciated. Chrisndg (talk) 17:13, 6 November 2014 (UTC)

I worked on the article some more, could you please review the edits and advise if this is a step in the right direction. Thank you in advance. Chrisndg (talk) 17:30, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
 * To be true: you are doing great in neutralising the article! The Banner talk 21:22, 6 November 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for your response and help. I have just completed another edit. Have I addressed the issue of it sounding like an advertisement to satisfaction? Is it OK to remove the tag on the article?

I would also like to delete this tag:

Chrisndg (talk) 00:45, 7 November 2014 (UTC)

Having not heard back, I assume we are in agreement. I am going to remove the two tags above and proceed to work on adding citations to address the 3rd tag. Again, thanks for your review time. Chrisndg (talk) 15:01, 7 November 2014 (UTC)

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