User talk:Chrisp24/sandbox/draft

Good information, just make sure you don't copy sentences word for word. I didn't read from the sources but your sentences seem choppy and don't flow as good as they could.

Peer Review - Pesansky
"There are many different kinds of identity theft ranging from medical to financial to child identity theft." This is under the section for financial identity, I understand that you wanted an introductory sentence to the paragraph but it is not directly related to the financial identity topic so I feel like it needs to be more specific to financial identity. Also if that section is all about Tax Identity theft then consider just titling the section that instead of financial identity theft for more specificity. Pesanskym (talk) 12:39, 1 November 2018 (UTC) Megan Pesansky

Michael Zanni
Make sure you separate your references from your text. Possibly expand on different types of identity theft, especially since it's such a big topic in the actual class. Also add a possible solution(s) to Child Identity Theft since you added one for both Individual and Tax Identity. Michaelazanni (talk) 23:22, 7 November 2018 (UTC)Michaelazanni