User talk:Chrispul

What I plan to do is make the HVAC definition a little more relevant so that someone with normal intelligence can grasp the concepts a little better, and to talk a little about the construction ened of the HVAC field. The revisions that will be made to the article are really just a couple of extra pragraphs talking about what I've gone through in my day as a construction worker, as well as the simple concept of how a closed loop refrigeration system works.
 * This shouldn't be the result of your own experience as a construction worker: this is, in Wikipedia terms, original research, and not allowed. WP:TONE gives a few suggestions about the style of writing—giving an account with the first or second person narrative style is regarded as unencyclopaedic. Apart from all that, welcome to the project! Please don't be discouraged because I've reverted your entry: stick with it! --Old Moonraker (talk) 22:12, 4 May 2012 (UTC)