User talk:ChristianDelano/sandbox

Peer Review from Kaleena
Hi Christian, "Bahrain was bombed by Italians but there's not much more then that included in the article", I agree that there is not much in regards to this topic stated within your article. I would find a good resource for information on this and add some information. Its also important to note that there is little to no information on Hong Kong. Might be note worthy to add some information under that sub title. Sounds as if you have a plan as to what information you want to add and all of it seems important and pertinent to the article. HISTORYLEARNER2018 (talk) 14:42, 19 April 2018 (UTC)