User talk:Christinacarnagie/sandbox

Edit of article draft: - Very well written with a professional tone. - Did not notice any grammar or spelling errors. - The last statement talked about the benefit of completely stopping nicotine use. You could go more in-depth on why completely stopping is better than the use of the nicotine patch. - Could also discuss what helps people quit and stay faithful to smoking cessation. Howerzym (talk) 02:48, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Christina,

I thought the information that you added to the article was relevant and was not over or under presented. I thought the information gave the topic more clarity. When reading through your draft I noticed a possible grammatical error in the phrase "In recent years, the negative effects of tobacco use has been brought the attention of the population". I thought you might want to add "....has been brought to the attention of the population". I also noticed "preventable" was spelled as "preventible" in your article. Other than those minor changes, I think your article did a great job discussing the importance of smoking cessation and adding data to support this without overwhelming bias.

Kellyalex (talk) 22:19, 2 December 2017 (UTC)Alex Kelly