User talk:Christinamata/sandbox

Christina's Peer Review:

Your outline is very detailed and specific. I agree with the changes planned. I read the article and it is actual links to articles, and hard to find the texts so not sure how reliable they are.

would be nice to add more information or links to the section of "The xoanon" and is there are no reliable sources maybe delete that section? Also in the pediments section "She is thought to hit a falling Giant, whose foot is the only remain. Another figure features a lying giant, whereas two side figures, once posed at the corners of the pediment, depict two more falling giants. "

There is no reference to that.. who said she is thought to have hit a falling giant? and is it "once posed" or "once posted"? might be a grammar error. Overall your outline is a good start to making changes and adding information.

Catsegura22 (talk) 00:00, 27 October 2017 (UTC)Catsegura22