User talk:Christinegardella/sandbox

There may be too much information that is used per source. It may not be reasonable to have entire paragraphs with only one source to back it up. It may be easy to just take another source that agrees with it and use them together. Ctadelman (talk) 17:39, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Ctadelman

Feedback from Elysia
Hi I've made some changes to your sandbox (which you can view in the history) and tagged some sentences with issues. Specifically, you have several instances of vague language. Saying "currently" or "recently" is vague, so give a date. Saying "many researchers" or "according to developers" is also vague. I also tagged a statement for being uncited. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:45, 28 November 2018 (UTC)