User talk:Christopherr b/sandbox

Stephanie Schieren- Peer Review

You seem to be heading in the right direction so far with your draft. The information that you've found about Donald Trump and his Muslim registry should make a nice edition to the Islamophobia in the Media article. All I suggest is that you add a bit more detail in regards to Donald Trump and his policies, and make sure to add citations. Another portion you might want to include is his constant use of the phrase, "radical Islamic terror", and talk about the controversy that it caused.

Thank you Stephanie. I agree with the fact that more detail should be added in regards of Donald Trump. I also intend to add more statistical facts to my section of the article to increase the credibility of it. I will also be including more sources to support my information and i will definitely look into adding another portion regarding "radical islamic terror" and the controversy that it caused. Thank you for the feedback and i will be taking it all into consideration. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Christopherr b (talk • contribs) 18:12, 7 March 2017 (UTC)

draft feedback
Hi! It looks like you are interested in adding content relating to Donald Trump to the Islamophobia in the media article. I suggest focusing on finding sources that go beyond a single person's opinion or a single example. To be useful for this article, the sources should address the topic in a pretty broad way, ideally from a scholarly media studies perspective rather than a newspaper opinion column.--Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:52, 10 March 2017 (UTC)