User talk:Christyczar

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Sandbox feedback
Hey Christy. I see you've already added your proposed content to the article; good for you for being bold. You might consider incorporating some of the pre-existing content into your History section. Some copy-editing is needed, but I'm a bit concerned about your tone - try to be encyclopedic and neutral, avoiding judgement statements like "a beautiful place". Nikkimaria (talk) 01:17, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

Park information
Hello

I made a few corrections to the article, including spelling and grammar errors. I also added the agency that manages the park and other information. I can add more later. Also, like stated above, avoid opinion words, like "beautiful".

I hope this helps. Jared Kofsky (talk) 22:57, 19 October 2012 (UTC)