User talk:Chughes117/Technological convergence

This article needs a lot of work to make it better. I found a lot of mistakes and suggestions that can be help you improve this article. To begin, the lead section is not clear enough, and it needs to be quoted. In addition, the Elements of Technology Convergence section sounds like an opinion and it has no quotes (each section should at least have one quote). The editor also uses a lot the same source which means he is only using one person’s point of view. You should find more sources that support your information. Also, there is no reason for the examples to be separate. I believe that the best idea is to combine them with its own content or combined all the examples together. Finally, I find the article hard to read because it has a lot of information that in my opinion are not so relevant and does not really make sense.Rashelyp (talk) 14:56, 10 March 2020 (UTC)