User talk:ChujieQiu0614

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With His Pistol in His Hand
Thanks for starting With His Pistol in His Hand. However, it needs a lot of work (mainly in paring down the overly detailed analysis and synopsis, and redundant phrases). Please review recommended article structure at WikiProject Books, and WikiProject Books/Non-fiction article, as well as an overview at Writing better articles. Good encyclopedia articles should not at all resemble term papers. Conciseness and clarity are key. Cheers, --Animalparty! (talk)