User talk:Chunanarita/Mercy Oduyoye

Hi! I am peer-reviewing your wikipedia contribution for WGS301. Your article is looking great and there is some really great information there. I just have a few notes that I would recommend reviewing:

1. There are a somewhat significant amount of grammatical errors that make it difficult to follow the narrative. Maybe ask someone else to review your article in person with you to make sure what you are trying to say is clear.

2. Your 5th reference, the interview with Oduyoye is very heavily referenced. It is an interview with information coming straight from her so it might be okay that it is heavily referenced, but maybe include some more information in the bulk of the article from other sources as well to be safe.

3. I noticed there are quite a few sentences that seem like there should be a reference attached at the end but there isn't. Maybe try to place more attachments to the sources in the body of the article. I even noticed a quote without a reference at the end of it. It is very crucial that you always include a reference after a quote - it can be considered plagiarism if you do not do this.

4. Lastly, your quotes do not have page numbers after them and while many wikipedia articles do not, our professor for this course asked us to add page numbers after direct quotes from sources. If you can, try to find page numbers for your quotes and place them in brackets after each quote.

Overall, well done! There is a more detailed review on the peer review page created for us! Sydneyhill24 (talk) 18:23, 23 November 2021 (UTC)