User talk:Cicivasc

Your submission at Articles for creation: Goldmund (May 27)
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Lapablo (talk) 19:49, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Article declined
Dear, I see the article has been declined the reason being it looks like advertising. Can you advise what part of the article should be removed/edited to suit Wikipedia needs? I hope the fact I was transparent about my connection to the company is not biasing your perception about the page. I do believe we are fairly eligible for referencing. For your information, our company is mentioned here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_compact_disc_player_manufacturers and it is the only company without a Wikipedia page. And here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_phonograph_manufacturers. Looking forward to your feedback. Kind regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cicivasc (talk • contribs)

May 2020
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Thank you. Drm310 🍁 (talk) 15:23, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Ok, thank you Drm310 ! I confess I am a bit struggling with the talks and so on... I'll do my best. Stay safe Cicivasc (talk) 08:25, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

DIsclosing conflict of interest / financial interests
Hello Cicivasc. I will let address the reasons about why your draft article was declined. I'd like to go over some of the things about disclosing conflict of interest and paid editing.

I can see that you have made a good-faith effort to be transparent, which we appreciate! However, you need to use some different templates instead of the ones you have chosen. If you have a financial interest in the company - e.g. you are an employee or are acting as their representative for financial compensation - then you are deemed to be a paid editor. In this case, declaring a conflict of interest isn't quite sufficient... you must follow Wikipedia's stricter policy on disclosure of paid contributions. This is what you do: After that, you are all set. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 15:40, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) On the talk page of the draft, you use the connected contributor (paid) template. This tells other editors that you are being paid to create/edit the article, and who is paying you. I have taken the liberty of putting it there for you.
 * 2) On your userpage, instead of the UserboxCOI template that you've used, you would use the paid template instead. The code would be as follows:

Thank you Drm310. I've done number 2. I know you said you did number 1, but when I click on sandbox I can't the tag mentioned on connected contributor (paid) template. So I've added like this.

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I confess I've read some guiding pages but I am still struggling to understand all technicalities of wiki editing, commenting and retrieving feedback. Is there any detailed video tutorial you could recommend?

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Goldmund


A tag has been placed on Draft:Goldmund, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the.  Spencer T• C 18:06, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of User:Cicivasc/sandbox


A tag has been placed on User:Cicivasc/sandbox, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the.  Spencer T• C 18:07, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for declaring your conflict of interest. That doesn't mean you can write what you like, you must follow the guidance below:
 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation or company, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, logs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the company or organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls
 * The notability guidelines for organisations and companies have been updated. The primary criteria has five components that must be evaluated separately and independently to determine if it is met:
 * significant coverage in
 * independent,
 * multiple,
 * reliable,
 * secondary sources.
 * Note that an individual source must meet all four criteria to be counted towards notability.


 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  09:14, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Goldmund has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Goldmund. Thanks! CNMall41 (talk) 20:55, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Goldmund (August 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Timtrent were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Fiddle  Faddle  09:17, 7 August 2020 (UTC)


 * I have expanded the comment at the draft to reflect the lack of understanding that you expressed in your help desk message. If you have questions please ask me on my own talk page or deploy in a reply here. To make the ping work you must sign your message using ~ and place the template during the same edit before pressing "Publish changes"  Fiddle   Faddle  09:39, 7 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Dear Thank you for your feedback. I am reviewing the references as per your recommendation. I have published some edits to Goldmund draft page and will try to continue improving it. I did not click on "Resubmit" only on "Publish Changes". I don't know if you can access these edits. If you do see them could you advise if the references are good now or not and if you don't find this much, what exact references are inappropriate? Were Wired and Robb Report the only reputable sources on the list and all the other junk? Or is there other suitable references? Thank you in advance Cicivasc (talk) 13:46, 7 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Goldmund (October 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:33, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Goldmund
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 06:02, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Goldmund


Hello, Cicivasc. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Goldmund".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 05:33, 22 April 2021 (UTC)