User talk:Circlechen002

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Hello, Circlechen002, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review by Katie Krol
"Black Star feels that it is important for African American communities to come together to form unity for their children's education and the opportunities that they have. The ultimate goal for them is to get as many people from the community involved so no one is left behind in this fight for equality" These statements could possibly be written in a more neutral stance.

"This decision in turn will have the ability to help lower income communities in the Chicagoland area." This is a confusing sentence, maybe re-word for clarity.

The programs section looks good, with lots of information.

Overall, great start to the article. I would recommend looking into making some sentences more clear and neutral. Great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:241:8200:2188:759C:2BE3:47E1:667F (talk) 05:57, 7 November 2017 (UTC)