User talk:CirillaJinxOdin/Evaluate an Article

Provided a thorough critique of the article with a good balance between pointing out its strengths and weaknesses. You mentioned that a lot of information are missing. I would suggest that you also include what specific information is missing as well as why it's important that it should be included in the article. 2/2 Chihiro chihiro (talk) 15:42, 3 February 2021 (UTC)