User talk:Cisneros.angelina/sandbox

Hi Angelina,

This is Laura Smith and i would like to peer review your rough draft article. When you have a chance can you please leave me a note on my sandbox talk page and let me know where your article is located?

Thanks

Laura.smith450 (talk) 16:49, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi Angelina,

This is erika daniel, username ecdaniel. I am wondering the same thing as Angelina. I would like to peer review your article so can you please leave me a note in my sandbox to let me know where your article is located.

Thanks, Erika Ecdaniel (talk) 22:22, 9 May 2018 (UTC)ecdaniel

Peer Review by Mackenzie G
Hi Angelina, I am reviewing your article off of your eval. notes. You have done a fantastic job evaluating in my opinion. This article does seem a bit tricky to get through and its got some bias, so well done. You've done a great job of finding the biased sections and plagiarized sections. Some critiques or possible things to fix: I agree with your statement on the fact that the intro of the article seems biased. Also after reading the second paragraph of the intro section it seems biased or a personal opinion. Whether that's true, we don't know as there is no citation for that whole paragraph. Possibly finding new info for that part or just removing that part would be sufficient? The "Types" section for types of overfishing is a bit oddly laid out; not sure if it's just me though. Great job, keep up the good work. Mackenzzzie (talk) 04:52, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review - Laura Smith
Great job with the analytical review of the article. It looks like there can be some improvements with 'close plagiarism" and correct citing here. With some revisions in wording to keep it neutral your additions to the article will be great.Laura.smith450 (talk) 23:37, 10 May 2018 (UTC)