User talk:Citizen Kane 11

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lumentum Holdings (February 1)
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KylieTastic (talk) 21:51, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lumentum Holdings (May 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Theroadislong (talk) 17:38, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Help
Hello! I see I just missed you in the IRC help chat. If you pop back in I can try to help you. Otherwise, in short: your article lacks WP:RS (reliable sources). Such sources must not be written by the company. So PR is unacceptable. If your boss asked you to write this article, I suggest you read WP:BOSS. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 18:04, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Hello! No I'm not working there.. I'm working on lasers in general and I wanted to add this Laser Company to Wikipedia. Thank you very much for your comment. I will try to improve the draft ! --Citizen Kane 11 (talk) 18:18, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Lumentum Holdings


A tag has been placed on Draft:Lumentum Holdings, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. Hatchens (talk) 05:52, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

Please don't delete my article! I really want to improve it so that it meets the requirements! Citizen Kane 11 (talk) 09:16, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * You have that opportunity now. Fences  &amp;  Windows  14:04, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Lumentum Holdings
Hello, Citizen Kane 11. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Lumentum Holdings, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:01, 17 October 2021 (UTC)