User talk:Citysikhs

City Sikhs Network
Hi, thanks for email. Because we have a policy against usernames that give the impression that the account represents a group, organization or website, please take a moment to create a new account with a username that represents only you, or this account might be blocked.

A number of problems with your article.
 * It did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines for organisations. The only source was your own site, which is not neutral or a reliable source.
 * It was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as facts include: aim to inspire people to be the best they can be... talented individuals... phenomenal success... high profile events... high profile interfaith and community boards

It's basically just spam, promoting the organisation, but telling us nothing encyclopaedic. How many members? What is the funding and turnover? Who are these "highly talented" individuals?

You really need to start from scratch, with proper sources and facts rather than advertising

 Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:12, 11 May 2012 (UTC)