User talk:Civictech/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi,

I think your article is very well researched. I do have a few suggestions. You should add hyperlinks to your artciel. I think it’s a great way for the reader to find more information on certain topics throughout the article. Also in your first paragraph I noticed you mentioned 3 objectives. To divide them you should make separate paragraphs for each. I feel like they might be a little crowded. In your last two sections (Europe and North America, and Africa) I would suggest adding more citations after each paragraph from where you got the informations from. Regardless, I think this is a well put together article.--Lolbabycowboy (talk) 08:36, 27 October 2022 (UTC)