User talk:Cjott/sandbox

Amanda's peer review - You had good information in the article. I think you're just in the process of writing everything but make sure everything is in complete sentences/clear for the reader. Add in links to other wikipedia articles and citations using the wiki tools. Based on training/my understanding, pretty much every sentence should come from a source. In the last bit of new text when you talk about cost benefits, be sure to explain what they are and format that in an appropriate way (no exclamation mark, full sentences. In your first paragraph, last sentence when you say "So..." be more matter of fact about that since this is all coming from research. Ex of complete sentences: first sentences of new text should say are due.

Aeboornazian (talk) 19:53, 16 November 2017 (UTC)