User talk:Clab24/sandbox/articledraft

Peer Review Edits
All of this said, I think you did a really good job with your edits and I think it really adds to the article to make it better than it already is :) Cnschroeder99 (talk) 15:52, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
 * I like how you added to the awards and honors sections
 * The revision of "The Continuing Band" section is worded very well and easy to understand while staying neutral
 * The Awards and Honors section I think you did a good job in listing them from most recent year to oldest year
 * I think you could add the links that the original article already has, such as "Ray Sings, Basie Swings", the blue highlighted words. When you include those it would be a good idea to add the links they already have.
 * For the Leaders section, I think it would be a good idea to put those references in the references section if you haven't already done so.