User talk:Clairestum/sandbox

Peer Review
Claire, you should take a look at the bottom of the referencing guide for some tips on how to eliminate duplicate references and make it easier on yourself when using a reference more than once: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Referencing_for_beginners. The substance of your article isn't bad at all, but you should look at trying to flesh it out more and and some headings to include an overview, background information, etc. Additionally, illustrations are an easy way to get points on your article, so you might want to look into inserting a picture in your article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kcahlber (talk • contribs) 22:59, 10 October 2010 (UTC)