User talk:Clarachroma

edit to Paul Sharits
Hello! Welcome to Wikipedia! I noticed that you edited Paul Sharits. I do not think the phrase "some say" is useful here. Could you please edit your addition to say who actually claims that he died by suicide? Further, could you please update your citation to include the page number where this information can be found? Please consider using a template like Template:Cite_thesis for your citation. Let me know if you have questions or would like to discuss this - you can reply here or on my talk page. Thanks! Doctormatt (talk) 01:46, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

I find, on page 340 of Fernando Henrique Lacerda Stutz's dissertation that you cite, the claim "comenta-se que Sharits tenha cometido suicidio", which google translate translates as "it is said that Sharits committed suicide". This does not seem like material worth adding to the article, as it is too vague and unspecific. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on this. Cheers! Doctormatt (talk) 03:17, 23 June 2021 (UTC) -

Hey, it's fine, I think you are right :) I'll leave it as it was. Thankx for your kindness! - clarachroma (I have forgotten to described what I've changed, by accident... but it's back as it was yesterday)
 * Thank you for responding and changing that edit. You can sign your talk page posts with four tildes  and it will put your user name, date and time.  Cheers! Doctormatt (talk) 18:43, 23 June 2021 (UTC)