User talk:Clary Jaxon

What you did on 2014 University of Minnesota rape case is more than a little problematic. Drmies (talk) 15:25, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

@Drmies Being new to editing Wikipedia I fully understand removing the two pieces of material referencing a single twitter post and a reference to the subject matter's blog post matter, but it's a stretch to say "much" of my inserted material was sourced from twitter. The current version you reverted to is still quite sensationalist and inaccurate. At the very least the sentence about the alleged physical injuries, "He left claw marks on her body, bit chunks of her breasts, and shoved his fist so far into her mouth that he tore open part of her tongue during the attack.[2]" alluding to 1st or 2nd degree criminal sexual assault conviction is not correct and should be removed as they are just allegations. The referenced source, crimewatchdaily.com got it wrong and sensationalized the story. Drill-Mellum was only convicted of 3rd degree criminal sexual misconduct, involving lack of consent. I appreciate your consideration in this particular modification.

@Drmies Being new to editing Wikipedia I fully understand removing the two pieces of material referencing a single twitter post and a reference to the subject matter's blog post matter, but it's a stretch to say "much" of my inserted material was sourced from twitter. The current version you reverted to is still quite sensationalist and inaccurate. At the very least the sentence about the alleged physical injuries, "He left claw marks on her body, bit chunks of her breasts, and shoved his fist so far into her mouth that he tore open part of her tongue during the attack.[2]" alluding to 1st or 2nd degree criminal sexual assault conviction is not correct and should be removed as they are just allegations. The referenced source, crimewatchdaily.com got it wrong and sensationalized the story. Drill-Mellum was only convicted of 3rd degree criminal sexual misconduct, involving lack of consent. I appreciate your consideration in this particular modification. Clary Jaxon (talk) 21:39, 17 June 2020 (UTC)

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Happy editing! Drmies (talk) 15:22, 16 June 2020 (UTC)