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Lawndale elementary district
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I reverted your edits to the elementary district article. This is because the district covers Lawndale and unincorporated areas. Many places with Gardena, CA addresses are not in Gardena, for instance. All of the city is in LAUSD. The places in Lawndale are outside of the city limits. However it does serve portions of the city of Hawthorne. WhisperToMe (talk) 00:10, 5 May 2010 (UTC)

Also the promotionary language in this edit isn't encyclopedic. Think about how Encyclopedia Britannica would be written. Thanks WhisperToMe (talk) 00:17, 5 May 2010 (UTC)

Another note is that things need to be referenced. Please see V and Citing sources. Also in a general listing of elementary schools we don't consider school mascots to be particularly important. WhisperToMe (talk) 19:28, 5 May 2010 (UTC)