User talk:Claudia Paine22/sandbox

Overall great contribution to this article Victoria! Your re-organization and revision of existing sections essentially re-creates the article, and the new content provides greater detail regarding more contemporary Mexican politics. Starting with the writing itself, the article displays information in an accessible manner, with original wording showing no directly perceivable bias. I would primarily recommend running through the entire article sentence by sentence to catch some minor errors, such as misplaced spacing. Regarding the content, I recommend dissecting some sentences from the pre-existing content to ensure they align with NPOV guidelines. A few examples may be interpreted as biased and are not clearly written. Your specific contribution, however, is mostly neutral. Lastly, add a few more links and explanations for some politics-specific terms. Overall, the contribution transforms the article into a clearer, more reliable source of information for Mexican politics. Moving forward, the most impactful improvement to your article would come simply from more revision, given its solid standing in its current state. --Ddegenhart (talk) 04:58, 31 March 2020 (UTC)