User talk:Claudiaisabel15/sandbox

Race and health in the United States Peer Review
The original article had a huge gap in representation of different ethnicities. The group did a great job of including new sections for other ethnicities. It was a good idea for each group member to do a new ethnic group, and keeping the same subsections for each was a good starting point - it leaves a lot of potential for the development of more sections. Some further edits that could be made are putting Wikipedia links for key terms throughout the article such as "implicit bias" in the Intro, "European American" and "Alaska Native" in the Background. "Implicit bias" could also be explained in terms of the source cited. In the Criticism section, it would be helpful to include concrete definitions for race and ethnicity. Also, on this discussion of race vs ethnicity, it would also be helpful to clarify which term is favorable or accurate when talking about health disparities.Kristine2016 (talk) 03:47, 19 April 2019 (UTC)